The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country s development and progress To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

there is an opinion that the fund for scientific education should be privileged rather than others for the nation's growth. I agree with this statement due to its advantages. however, there is a wide range of drawbacks on the other hand.

it is evident that there are numerous benefits if the authority focuses on teaching science. Firstly, science plays a vital role in the progress of the country. there is an intense collaboration between science and several fields which are the main elements of development such as Health-care, production, and Traffic. For instance, inventions and researches from science help to create effective medicines, smart chains of products, and convenience transports. Secondly, focusing on investment for scientific education generates a profound youth. this is because, by worthwhile facilities, such a generation will be qualified as high-quality employees or employers. As a result, they contribute significantly to the growth of the nation.

however, if science was by far the most privileged, the other subjects would be impacted. A wealthy communication involves not only science, but also the others as economy, tourism, and art which highlight the income of the country. Thus, if governments only aim in science, we will not have a stable society. Furthermore, the singular aim in science threatens different occupations. it will be not fair to particular schoolers who want to work as their favor in the future. For example, a child love art should be guided to be a designer or an artist rather than an engineer or a doctor.

In conclusion, I completely believe that authorities should invest equally in several subjects regarding the evolution of them.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36431226766 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26053882742 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1030211374 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8823529412 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5882352941 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214171445514 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579495842178 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041129477245 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123915269509 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218318292822 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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