The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?
These recent decades have seen an outstanding development in space industry with plethora of achievements obtained by carrying out a great number of researches on other planets. Nevertheless, it is argued that government and big companies have been squandering time, money and effort which ought to be used to deal with many challenging problems facing the entire world today. I wholeheartedly believe that human beings will be able to reap a lot of benefits from these discoveries.
First and foremost, there is no denying that the natural resource which is formed by accumulation over thousands of years indeed has limitation and will run out of due to the great demand of everyday life. Therefore, findings about extraterrestrial life will play a crucial role in the process of finding and using alternative resources. Scientists around the world will be capable of making it possible to make use of resources found on other planets, which can help to reduce the gravity of environmental deterioration as well as adapt flexibly to human’s demands in every fields.
Furthermore, it is obvious that our earth may be not aptitude for supporting all the population which has a tendency to intensify significantly each year. Meanwhile, thorough researches of universe can help people to change our lifestyles and contrive to be ready for a complete new life in other planets if there are breakthroughs in the way aliens and mysterious creatures live and depend on that planet. This scenario will decrease the possibility of people to face a numerous issues due to the overpopulation.
Last but not least, detections about universal movements can make it possible for human to circumvent some unexpected accidents that may be caused by a huge change in the way of all-inclusive planets’ orbit. As a result, human will be well protected by means of anticipating some variations in galaxy and universe.
To sum up, I strongly believe that it is essential to make progress in the development of space industry owing to above-mentioned benefits.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2078313253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1758402534 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596385542169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4578441272 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.083333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899995077173 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03064363172 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029692750337 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427866983932 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349670576622 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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