Governments spend millions of dollars each year on their space programmes. Most recently, Mars is the focus of scientists' attention. Some people think this money would be better spent on dealing with problems closer to home. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the government spends a colossal amount of money when it comes to exploring outer space and the most recent focus of researchers' attention is mars. While some believe that funds should be allocated to more pressing issues to be dealt here on Earth, I feel that it is equally important to fund space programmes because it has several advantages to the human race.
The allocation of money by the government creates countless job opportunities. Courses which are related to this field like scientist, chemists and engineers are given the chance to practice and work their respective profession. Moreover, it is a complex and diverse field of science that requires different set of knowledge, skills and talents and it is only fair that the majority of the money goes to the salary of these professionals.
Also, there was a time that the creation of machineries used for space exploration has helped the medical field. One example is the digital imaging processing device that was used by National Aeronautics and space Administration (NASA) to develop pictures contributed to the developement of Magnetic Resonance imaging (MRI) and Computerized Tomography (CAT scans). Furthermore, they have also contributed to the the creation of programmable pacemakers and tools used for cataract surgery. it definitely does not waste the government's resources if this is how space studies can contribute to other discoveries.
Finally, the survival of the human race is important; therefore, it is only reasonable to know if life on other planets is possible, especially on mars. studies on the possibility on the existence of other life forms in planets like Uranus, Neptune and Saturn have already started and scientists have used robots and extensive research on these planets and discovered that they have several elements and signs of life. it is only ideal to spend more money for further research.
In conclusion, Although there are those who believe that, rather spending money on space studies, problems should be addressed here on our planet, I feel that researching about space can bring more benefits such as jobs, technological breakthroughs and the possibility of living in another planet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27840909091 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94157994316 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573863636364 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1639668813 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.923076923 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142478342745 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516290218734 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412696610813 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796954633775 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393802028499 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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