Successful companies use advertising to make more sales. What can make an advertisement very effective? Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society?
Nowadays, to increase the sales of big and successful companies, they use advertisement to persuade the people in to buying their product and there are several factors that makes this effective. In my opinion, adverts bring both positive and negative effects to the community.
In today 's society, to effectively sell an item, advertisement should be both informative and creative. Consumers usually buy things that inform them that something is missing from their lives and that they definitely need the product being advertised. Informing the public helps them to know that the product has either been improved or is new to the market. Another point to consider is how they express their creativeness in their product commercial to the buyers. A study made from The University of California last 2010, shows that 55% of people actually buy an item because they liked the commercial on television they have watched. Lastly, if product is in demand or useful, it will be most likely to be bought by many people; thus, increasing it sales.
The good thing about publicizing a product is that it brings convenience to the public and informing them of the latest items in the market. Instead of spending time going to the mall and checking every new product, they can conveniently watch it on TV, listen to a radio or read about it on the newspaper, saving the time of an individual.
On the other hand, the downside of advertisement is that sometimes, they false advertise a product and mislead buyers. they want people to believe that they should 'keep up with the Joneses' making them buy product that is unnecessary to their lives. This habit not only waste their money but it also increases the number of waste which is detrimental to the environment.
In conclusion, successful companies use an informative and creative advertising as way to effectively sell their product and increase their sales and I believe that this can bring can have its advantages and disadvantages to the society.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99700598802 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79656265195 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532934131737 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.442337834 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.214285714 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180121959451 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659265729292 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623221698146 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121921879373 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544233470093 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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