A growing number of people work by telecommuting, that is, the employee works from home, using a computer and the Internet to connect with the office.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of working this way?
While telecommuting is becoming increasingly popular, there are both benefits and drawbacks to this way of working. Telecommuting has many conveniences for the employee, and it can help the employer cut costs as well. On the other hand, employers often feel it makes it more difficult to manage their workers.
Telecommuting makes things more convenient for the employee. For one thing, the is no need to spend time and money commuting between work and home. In addition, the employee can wear casual clothes most days so does not have to spend a lot of time and money shopping for work clothes. Finally, working at home means the employee has more time to devote to family responsibilities such as cooking, cleaning, and childcare.
Another thing to be considered is telecommuting allows the employer to cut costs so the company is able to save money for another thing. Knowing that most employee can work from home, the employer can rent a smaller office for operational matters because they do not really need a big space working place. Moreover, they can reduce the amount of equipment installed at the office since most of the employee does not work at the office. In spite of the tiny working place and less equipment, the company will require smaller support staff.
However, there is a challenge for a company which allows doing telecommuting. The biggest problem is they will face more difficulties to manage own workers. Telecommuting means the employer will not have full control of what the employee are doing since they can be in various place, city, or even country. It may cause hard to supervise work. The supervisor also can not make sure how well the employee manages their time. They do not really know whether the workers are overload or not. Furthermore, when there is something urgent and they need to have a meeting in person, it will be hard to do immediately.
Based on what has explained, telecommuting has several positive impacts on the company but also has some negative aspects. In conclusion, the advantages of telecommuting are stand out more than the drawbacks, so I personally think that telecommuting will gain more benefits for both employer and employee if it is applied.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, while, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, such as, for another thing, for one thing, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97580645161 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79738756901 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513440860215 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.549805447 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.55 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180276198141 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589256804471 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607152610307 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992260729187 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619700966088 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.