Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?
As technology now is growing rapidly, people must get used to a new way of communication. We are able to reach each other through social networking sites or well-known as social media. This changes may provide negative impact like spending more time on gadget than socializing with people. On the flip side, social media also acquire several benefits, such as allowing us to share and change ideas or knowledge, communicating with long-distance acquaintances.
Playing social media makes our society from children to adults are getting addicted to the mobile phone. They often keep scrolling down their social media every day. Without realizing, they waste their time mostly on it. If we do not pay attention to this habit, we will end up having fun with our cell phone and forget the importance of social life. It may lead to an increase in our individualistic and reduce our value as a human being.
In spite of the drawback mentioned, social media is proven to bring some positive impacts on our life as well. First, we are able to share and gain knowledge through social media. Once we connect to the internet, we can enhance our skill by reading news, articles shared by other people. Moreover, this benefit might make us keep up to date with the current event happening around the world. Another impact is social media establish an easier process to talk with our relatives who live far away. We still can connect with them and know how well they are doing there through social media.
In conclusion, I personally agree that social media bring a negative impact on our society. But knowing the fact that it also benefits us more than what might danger us as explained. In the end, we should be fully aware of the potential negative effect from social media and use it wisely to get more advantages from it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80891719745 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50893975473 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59872611465 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3274723904 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152456556217 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542122369108 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514914346172 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104954513143 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390893981481 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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