Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Nowadays, happiness is believed very crucial in life by the majority of people. While several factors are needed to acquire this emotion, the way to define it also very hard to understand.
Happiness is differently presumed by each person, which is so hard for us to understand clearly. In the term of material, many people tend to think about the money which is considered very important in life. If someone owns an amount of it, the money will offer them a wealthy life which is supposed as a crucial factor for happiness. On the spiritual side, some people believe that living a new world, which has carefree lives or without the burden of normal life, will bring them happiness. For example, in Buddhism, the human usually faces the amount of pain and sorrow, so happiness is the state that they can escape out of this world and go to heaven.
Although the definition not similar from person to person, they agree about some factors that are needed to get happiness. Firstly, living with family and relatives is considered an important condition that leads to this feeling. Moreover, they can love and take care of their family members who people also will get back from them. Secondly, it will the undeniable factor that guides to happiness, if we have the right to speak and do what we like. For example, freedom of speech is always the criteria to assess the happiness of one nation.
In conclusion, although it is hard to have a clear definition of happiness which is achieved by some factors, it is still very important to our daily life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74538745387 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46958596997 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542435424354 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1819414961 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295517488764 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102642742657 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781529296552 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199844572485 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536993356375 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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