Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some
people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe
effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and
give your opinion.
It is increasingly clear that humanity has strained and undermined the flora and fauna. However, whether is is too overdue to take action or potent presciptions can be taken effect to fine-tune this situation.i agree with the latter standpoint, every citizen could make a huge difference.
On the one hand,it is noticeable that global warming,climate change and other catastrophic phenomenons are getting worse due to excessively pernicious human activities.The number of plants and animals listed the Red Data Book is soaring exponentially in view of uncontrolled poaching and human purposes especially for beauty industry. For example, elephants are hunted cruelly just for their ivories or snakes and bears are captured to take their skin and fur.Likewise,a number of precise trees or rare herbs are cut down to make furnitures and medical industry supplies.On account
of the shortage of trees and the decrease in animal figures,the balance of biodiversity lose and do harm to both the environment and human beings.Because of deforestation and exploitation,a lot of animals exterminate their habitats and eradicate their food resources.In other to strike a balance again, people need to make a huge effort to shield our fragile planet from devastating more.Therefore, some individuals think it is impossible to make up for this problem.
On the other hand, the optimistic think the public can tackle this problem if we implement proper solutions.No efforts is too small when we are protecting the environment.The public's wills and behaviors have a critical influence on a government's policies and a company's strategies. For example,if everyone say no to authentic fur handbags or snake-skin shoes, the companies that manufacture such products will switch to synthetic alternatives to survive in the market. Governments can enact laws,introduce programs to raise people' awareness and encourage people to lead a green lifestyle.Authorities should ban the enterprises from discharging pollutants into the environment and incentivize corporations to install waste purifiers. Schools can organize some environment-friendly activities.Taking a green Sunday as an example,people grow saplings and take care of those into big ones.Instead of producing more papers,people should consume less and recycle more which helps to stem the natural resources depletion and improve air quality.
In conclusion, Small doings can make an enormous change so nothing is too late to conserve our environment. Although the plant and animal species are plummeting,our
backbones and momentum can make the natural environment get better and better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2247.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68860759494 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47986264088 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630379746835 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.290513456 49.4020404114 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.7 106.682146367 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 20.7667163134 190% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2008383716 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715777022938 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492305644627 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963806025546 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437805998693 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 11.3001002004 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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