Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.
Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A number of people being engrossed in learning a second language remain unabated. Whether they pursue to learn it for travelling,working purposes or for other reasons has caused heated debate. In my view, individuals aspire to absorb a new language for a host of reasons.Not only does they has a desire to meet their recreational or occupational requirements but also they want to implement their school missions or broaden their horizons.
On the one hand, it is true that some people impel to learn an indigenous language for travelling and career pursuits. In terms of travelling, visitors have a huge desire to explore neoteric landmarks and to communicate with the locals thereby enjoying their trip to the fullest.Learning a language at hand assists travelers becoming more receptive and open-minded when they socialize with native speakers or ask for help.Moreover, They feel free to discover every corners of a foreign country without counting on tour guides or language barriers.With a view to working abroad, it is inevitable that most people master a language to work for a long-term duration in a nonnative country. Firstly, clerks have a high-paying job and high quality of life due to state of the art infrastructures and dynamic workplaces.Secondly, they have a chance to come into contact with novel cultures and customs and get attuned to those in a fast way.
On the other hand, some individuals learn a foreign vernacular because of their own interests or school compulsion.In some places, pupils usually learn another language as their subject at school and are obliged to gain knowledge about it because of high scores.For example,in Viet Nam,in a grade-school, students embark on an English learning process,some families take their children to English centers at the young age around 5,6.Seniors in Vietnam need to have an English certificate before graduating and some universities require it as an entrance application.Some people go after a foreign language since they get into it and yearn to internalize the beauty of that language.For instance, graduates majoring in language immerse in examining the origin and rule of that language.
In conclusion, all the sentiments mentioned above all make sense and consequently it is hard to come to an absolute conclusion. Digesting a new language always bring merits but some people decide to use that language for their own sake.Absorbing another language is a big opportunity for everyone who wishes to go on a trip, working overseas or for their own study purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23227383863 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20381667226 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557457212714 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 225.801507939 49.4020404114 457% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.777777778 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4444444444 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.7777777778 7.06120827912 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239196591681 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101676040365 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062198672155 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143176173317 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303140047903 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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