Many people believe that the human society has developed into a throw-away society which is filled with plastic bags and rubbish.What are the causes and solutions?
Our human beings demolish our fragile earth aggressively by getting into the pernicious habit of littering plastic bags and rubbish.That deed predispose to detrimental effects on the environment and humans are liable for it.The causes and measures are needed to look into
The development of a throw away community boils down to several causes. Firstly, people have a poor awareness about how exacerbated those plastic bags and garbage are and stay carrying out the same things which totally compromise their own society.Taking local markets as an example, sellers have a penchant for utilizing plastic bags instead of taking use of green ones.Households bring a number of plastic bags back home and throw those into rivers or burn which extremely do harm not only the environment but also the marine animals.Secondly, some countries are deficient in supervision systems and stringent environment laws so the citizens repeatedly litter plastic bags and trash in inappropriate places. In fact, impurities and non-degradable products are found profusely in underprivileged nations due to a lack of garbage collectors and environment concerns.People will not pack up their actions until they are fined.
To put this problem to an end, some measures are vital to be taken.Firstly, the official should incentivize the habitants to use cloth bags which are more resilient and environmentally friendly.Besides, some green programs are needed to be organised monthly to keep the locals updated about the efficient methods to curb plastic bag use.Secondly, the authority enacts severe policies which require people not to litter rubbish and exploit cloth bags .Surveillance cameras should be installed to keep an eye on people if they have illegal environment-related actions that could be applied successfully in developed countries.People need to alter their way of exploiting plastic bags and throwing rubbish because their small behaviors could lead to the death of fauna and the severe consequences to the earth.
The human society should adjust their throw-away habit and get attune to more environment-friendly one.We need to take action before this situation are getting more devastated.I believe that the solutions are implemented aptly and constantly, the throw away society can morph into a fresh and beautiful society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29979360083 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.890107452 49.4020404114 451% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 394.8 106.682146367 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.4 20.7667163134 344% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319488012468 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160746296857 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764136335481 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187129904859 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331518910464 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.3 13.0946893788 308% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.98 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.02 8.58950901804 140% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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