If people go to live in a new country, they should follow local customs and traditions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
As a part of globalisation era, many people migrate to another country to work and settle down. There are some conflicts opinions about how immigrants should follow local cultures. From my point of view, while I agree that people should conserve their old traditions, I believe that they need to follow the new local customs and traditions.
On the one hand, cultures are a part of individuals' identity; conserving their own traditions is a self-awareness and reminder about their existence, origin and history. Besides that, every culture has its own advantages, such as in the way parents grow their children; keeping and promoting those advantages might have benefits in certain circumstances. Moreover, conserving customs and traditions in new regions are contributing spreading their culture to the world; while nowadays, it is evident that people around the world respect and welcome cultural diversity.
On the other hand, to integrate with new environment quickly, people should follow local customs and traditions, which its values have been developed for a long time to satisfy local generations. Hence, its disputable values is a worthy reason to catch the local lifestyle. What is more, following the local traditions is a sign of respect to natives. As a result, locals will be easier to contact and build networks with, which is one of the fundamental factors that help people settle down on a new area steadily and rapidly.
In conclusion, I think people should conserve their own tradition when going to live in a new place; however, I strongly support them to follow the natives' customs and traditions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21755725191 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83063326902 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.355850717 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327514439775 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126649416644 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111447829647 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217851352273 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106368774462 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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