Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole

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Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?

In today’s technology-focussed world, illiteracy is one of the much-discussed issues in every developed county. There seem to be several major causes of this problem which leads to negative impacts both on individuals and societies. This essay will deal with the causes and effects of this controversial issue and give a conclusion.

There are many causes held responsible for this issue. Possibly the main cause is the poverty and high education fees. It is stated that poverty and child-labour work hand in hand. When people are poor and have large families, to overcome hardships, they are forced to send their children to work instead of school. Moreover, because of high expenses of education, these children could not afford to purchase books and stationeries. Another well-known reason is difficult living conditions especially in rural areas. In many countries, rural areas lack educational facilities. Having said that majority of rustic children prefer to stay with their families and help them instead of travelling to cities and attending schools.

Turning to possible effects, individuals and society are impacted by illiteracy. First of all, to consider the effects on individuals, because of competitive job market, they can not find well paying jobs. Therefore, they can not support their families and it results in to poverty. A further widely observed impact is on the development of a country. Illiterate people weaken the country’s progress and educational status. Due to the lack of skills and insufficient knowledge, they can be a huge burden on the country.

Overall, it is logical to conclude that poverty and difficult living conditions are the main causes, and they affect both individuals and the whole country.

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02624115648 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0680257213 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2777777778 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144992735083 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390305199132 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397058425242 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743776799552 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416604621891 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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