Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
In recent years, more and more people have left their home countries to be in search of a better life in another place. This phenomenon has become one of the major challenges received a great deal of attention around the world because of several reasons and its effects on society.
There are a lot of reasons leading to an increase in the wave of immigration. First of all, the desire for a better life and a safe future has motivated humans moving from low-income countries to higher-income ones. Indeed, living and working in developed nations means that people would have the number of employment opportunities with decent salaries, favorable work environments, and promotion prospects, which ensures not only their lives but also their families. Secondly, many nations around the globe are still in the situation of wars, conflicts, or terrorism, which forces their citizens to migrate to other ones in order to refuge. For example, due to the tension between Arab nations and Israel, locals cannot study and work in a peaceful condition, so they prone to cross borders to find places of peace and tranquility.
However, exodus also causes some negative effects on societies. First and foremost, the language barrier is the most impediment when in a foreign country. In fact, not any refugee is able to acquire a new language or has enough money to take an indigenous language class. As a result, they cannot seek jobs and become a burden on the host nation. Last but not least, when the excessive growth of the number of immigrants is disproportionate to the supply of accommodation and jobs,the insecurity is inevitable. For instant, if refugees cannot find jobs, they will easily get involved in social evil or commit a crime. This poses a threat to peace of country causing natives live in uncomfortable state.
In conclusion, setting foot on a new country to have better life prospects remains a host of drawbacks.People should thoroughly consider when they decide to leave their hometown.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81725538759 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2950506601 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0432866662199 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.016232680811 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033496656316 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0238350578794 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157712127077 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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