In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?
In recent years, traffic problems have massively increased across the globe.To tackle the alarming issues, the government has enacted many laws, among these, imposing heavy taxes on private car owners in order to have revenue that is spent on improving public transportation is an effective way.However,besides the advantages,there are some obstacles need to be taken into account.
It is clear that heavily compulsory taxes on car drivers bring a host of merits. One of the first benefits of such a measure is to reduce traffic accidents and traffic congestions. Indeed,high taxes would discourage people from purchasing cars,so to save money paying for car tax bills, family members tend to share their vehicle together instead of possesing their own car like before,which leads to the descrease not only in the number of cars in roads but also in accidents and traffic jams.Another positive effect is that this solution would encourage residents to take public transport.In fact, in most of cities even big cities, commuting by bus or train is an unfavourite choice for many due to the fact that poor conditions of these means of transport.The money that derive from car taxes would be invested in the public transports to satisty commutes’ need, which contributes to the number of users
Although this method has many advantages,there still exist some noteworthy disavantages.First of all,this may put a burden on those drivers with less money.Obviously, it is unfair for people who earn their livelihood from driving such as taxi drivers, ubers, grabs… they have to pay their main income for taxes,so they could not afford their everyday needs.Last but not least, this mesure may indirectly worsen the national economy especially automobile industry.For example, limiting the users of cars by high taxes would lose the profit of car industry. If these companies cannot make profit,they will contribute to the economy of the country.
In conclusion,imposing heavy taxes on car driver has many impacts. Local authorities must thoroughly implement policy to enhance some boons and limit some drawbacks of this solution
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34523809524 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10747922828 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622023809524 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 414.882722549 49.4020404114 840% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.571428571 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 20.7667163134 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.2857142857 7.06120827912 231% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253873669494 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102886219344 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681850833905 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142219778895 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789634946935 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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