The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is agrue that the increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural atmosphere. The following essay will analyse the reason behind this phenomenon abd then address some sollutions to tackle the problem.
First of all, in the international world and with the appearance of largre companies or great business. Not only does the demand of individuals had rose significantly, but also the managers of large companies are gave the numerous revenue from the production of consumer. Furthermore, in many developing nation the state use various hamful innovation for their development such as nagative chemical, so the environment will be affected a plenty of terrible inffuence by this action. To illustrate, there was an interview by Robben, the famous scientist professional which about the climate change, leading by poisonous equipment. The statistic showed that nearly every country become hotter because ozon layer has been broken.
A awareness, patiently and conscientious is hugely significant for the social and individuals life. Improving graduately the health of citizens in their nation, and also the employer can advance the quality of each production, creating more quantity and profitability. Moreover, the goverment should be have some campain to bannish hamful technology which have horrible affection to people life for the development of their country.
To conclude, i believe that phenomenon can stem from increased the demand of people or large companies and the poisonous chemical. However, this trand can improve by awareness and conscientious of each individuals
especially is the youngs generation.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...some sollutions to tackle the problem. First of all, in the international world...
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...lso the managers of large companies are gave the numerous revenue from the productio...
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...lso the managers of large companies are gave the numerous revenue from the productio...
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...r because ozon layer has been broken. A awareness, patiently and conscientious...
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...because ozon layer has been broken. A awareness, patiently and conscientious ...
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Message: Did you mean 'had'?
Suggestion: had
...lity. Moreover, the goverment should be have some campain to bannish hamful technolo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...for the development of their country. To conclude, i believe that phenomenon c...
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...ment of their country. To conclude, i believe that phenomenon can stem from i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55952380952 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02555619677 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5555095658 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187514234104 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648123112673 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937199131134 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101528786796 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101159210623 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...some sollutions to tackle the problem. First of all, in the international world...
^^
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...lso the managers of large companies are gave the numerous revenue from the productio...
^^^^
Line 2, column 215, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...lso the managers of large companies are gave the numerous revenue from the productio...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r because ozon layer has been broken. A awareness, patiently and conscientious...
^^
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...because ozon layer has been broken. A awareness, patiently and conscientious ...
^
Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had'?
Suggestion: had
...lity. Moreover, the goverment should be have some campain to bannish hamful technolo...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for the development of their country. To conclude, i believe that phenomenon c...
^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ment of their country. To conclude, i believe that phenomenon can stem from i...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55952380952 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02555619677 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646825396825 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5555095658 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187514234104 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648123112673 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937199131134 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101528786796 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101159210623 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.