Nowadays, people are extending most of the urban and rural areas and the nearest dwellers are not known each others, and people have lost the sense of society. This essay will discuss the causes of this problem and then suggest several methods that can be carried out to improve the situation.
Firstly, the excessive use of social media play a vital role in losing sense of community in people. To be more specific, with the support of social media, people prefer staying connected with who are familiar with them rather than socializing with their neighbors. To solve this, government should issue a new law, which encourages people to socialize with their dwellers in their neighborhood. For example, Taiwan government issued a law, which a person will achieve a gift if they establish a new friendship in their neighborhood. By doing this, sense of community and socialization would be strengthened and reinforced.
Secondly, competitive and busy life has pushed people into working more hours subconsciously. In more detail, children and adults no longer have time to socialize with their neighbor instead they have to cope with homework, deadlines and pressures at schools and work. According to a research paper, number of children do not know their neighbors has increased by 20% in the past 5 years, since they have to spend time on learning and revising lessons at home. To alleviate this, government should limit time at work and school of every individual and inspire people to fraternize with their neighbors. If more governments did this, people would be more socialized and not having to face with busy work.
In conclusion, the advent of social media and excessive working hours are two major consequences of the phenom. If the solutions mentioned above were implemental effectively. The problems would be alleviated.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16387959866 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77013540876 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558528428094 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5378809709 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201204132545 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697198021467 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543085561814 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108987030151 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512402821582 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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