Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Economical conditions and valuation of currency decided whether petrol prices cumulating or vice-versa. Some people might think about increasing price of petrol will help to control traffic as well as the pollution problem. We will discuss both views.
Nowadays petrol is an essential part of society, the entire economy is based on crude oil. Majority of manufacturing units, vehicles, army which are dependant on petrol. Revamping condition of the economy of the state is just possible due to significance of the petrol. Perhaps, global pollution tolerated by our society to make sure growth rates will not be affected due to this. However, this will to develop advanced technology, and infrastructure. It plays a vital role in the life of each and every human being.
Although, now people are getting more aware of its detrimental effects on the whole of mankind, This boon is now getting bane for humanity. Rudimentary effects of petrol after burning to release toxic components into the air which will cause health-related issues, quite often we able to see such incidents in day to day life.
Increasing petrol prices will not be helpful because of our dependency, but nowadays scientist trying hard to resolve these issues on top priority. Nuclear energy, tidal energy, wind energy such alternatives are coming out. Talking about vehicles, instead of petrol people now using electrical vehicle to reduce pollution and for traffic control rules and regulation will be helping our nation to resolve traffic problems.
Artificial intelligence also helping people to resolve traffic-related issues.
In conclusion, I strongly condemn to increase the petrol prices which is not the only solution to resolve this issues, awareness and using advance technologies to come up with the proper and prosperous solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, talking about, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38111888112 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83528275566 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3829088084 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145033936719 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461785152928 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492281044137 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760424350842 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439296840118 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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