Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international orginizations. Other think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion
Developing country's growth rate depending upon its GDP, which is nothing but infrastructure, facilities, and manufacturing. Similarly, I partially agree with both statements, now discuss advantages and disadvantages.
Developing countries like China, India, Brazil still need to give priority to poverty, education, infrastructure, technology and health. Resolving these issues a lot of investment required from the government. Economical condition of these countries can not bear such huge amount as well as required technical and non-technical assistance from international organizations. Road-map to achieve their targets in a stipulated time frame, Global banks are having leverage and financial task force to sanctions such funds to developing nations.
For example, India initiated projects, Such as nuclear power plants, highway and dams construction etc. to raise the standard of living, per person capita.
Projects has been monitored by the organization, after completion of these projects, recover this amount from the project to ensure debt will remain under control.
WHO is recognized organization which lend money to different nation regarding health related projects.
The amount of loan is as a debt over country, which directly or indirectly affecting the development of the county as well as the economy. Huge amount of interest has to be paid for such funds, valuation of the money , which matters mostly over hear.
In conclusion, such financial aid help for the nations to develop their respective countries with providing basic infra, health, education to the people, also guided with proper roadmap to utilise this amount more wisely, so I agree with both statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, similarly, so, still, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72727272727 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07193853676 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679841897233 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2911888858 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158662217321 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491941455492 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402263500289 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597714612811 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564041916804 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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