Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers.What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Essay topics:

Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers.

What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

I strongly believed this statement, Technology involution has boon for entire humanity. we will try to discuss advantage and disadvantage of future cars.

In 21st century human has developed new technologies such as " artificial intelligence" . Which has capability to change the entire future of world. Firstly talking about disadvantage of future cars. Difficult to understand the programming codes, which is a foundation of these cars. It might help to raise the cybercrime activities throughout the world, however, consequences will be worsed enough to demolish not only human being but also destroying nature. Industrialisation has been increasing where automation has taken place of person, which causes unemployment. This technology is quite expensive for common man. Maintainace cost also very high.

Now we can discuss advantages, Future car has ability to follow rules and regulation which will help to reduce road accidents, which is biggest achievement for mankind. Due to this time saving will be possible as well as fuel consumption and cost of drive will be reduced effectively.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with scientists and their efforts. Which will help people to live long and lasting.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, talking about, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 187.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55614973262 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17814586453 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0255024615 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2142857143 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192158717622 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575604451358 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450024832462 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114531438357 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375376775763 0.056905535591 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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