Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers.What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Essay topics:

Scientists predict that in the future cars will be driven by computers.

What are the reasons behind this? Is it a positive or negative development?

I strongly believed this statement, Technology involution has boon for entire humanity. we will try to discuss the advantage and disadvantage of future cars.

In 21st century human has developed new technologies such as " artificial intelligence" . Which has the capability to change the entire future of the world. Firstly talking about disadvantage of future cars. Difficult to understand the programming codes, which is a foundation of these cars. It might help to raise the cybercrime activities throughout the world, however, consequences will be worsed enough to demolish not only human beings but also destroying nature. Industrialization has been increasing where automation has taken the place of a person, which causes unemployment. This technology is quite expensive for a common man. Maintainance cost is also very high.

Now we can discuss advantages, Future car has the ability to follow rules and regulation which will help to reduce road accidents, which is biggest achievement for mankind. Due to this time saving will be possible as well as fuel consumption and cost of drive will be reduced effectively.

Companies like Tesla, Apple, Google invented smart future-ready cars. These car equipped with smart tech as well as artificial intelligence which will help car to drive smoothly on the roads. It enhanced the experience of comforts. It can able to communicate with other vehicle to securely drive on roads. Future car plays a vital role in human developments.

In conclusion, I strongly agree with scientists and their efforts. Which will help people to live long and lasting. Enable to go further into this will change entire face of the world.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, talking about, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33834586466 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0740189498 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6947993922 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212092508735 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576154655118 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453261842098 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122043924541 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275491880201 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.8 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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