Some people say that it is not good for children to grow up in the city and that the countryside is more suitable for them. Do you agree or disagree?
Since 1967 in the india, we have seen education has leverage in our enitire country. Still in the India, some people believed, that a countryside social and the economical education will be more effective than city, while on the other hand some people gives priority to city. Discussing advantage and disadvantage from both point of views in this eassy.
Firstly, a countryside eduction has its own benefits over this issue. Rural area has ability to teach children the importance of nature, values of our society, cultural diversity. However, lack of opportunities and scope available for children makes a countryside more vulnerable. Leisureness also affected due to less earnings and poor economical structure. Although, there are few facilities available at a rural areas still majority of contribution has been done by this area for the last 65 years.
Technology has contributed more in the growth of major cities, which created a lot of opportunites for the people. Better educational facilities available in city, I stongly agreed with this statement. Similarly, awareness about education opens up uncharted terretories for next generation. Grow up in the city, which can help you in different ways such as it enables to horning your skills, adopt and learn new techical terms, and wisely utilise your time schedule to chase your ambitions.
In conclusion, 21st century, still countryside lagging in terms of education as compare to the metro cities, where a lot of opportunities as well as facillities are available. Nowadays,Education is rudimentory, so cities well versed with it, So according to me still today, urban areas playing vital role in the growth of children and their education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30258302583 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01248067677 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642066420664 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8516830162 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213309707544 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628331010923 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585399754045 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11040154178 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03827965323 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.