Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in.

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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in.

In modern era, people forget our culture and tradition continuosly and only running behind money as well as become selfish. So, some humans believe that we should bring return our older culture and tradition value for the family and the local communities to making better world for live in. Thus, I strongly agree with the given notion.
To begin with, modern people think that money is essential part of their life. So, they give full time for their job or business and can’t give time to their family as well as relatives . Therefore, they could not bring happiness in their home and could not keep happy themselves. To illustrates, in some family, all members are runnig beyond money and earn much money but they could not have time for take dinner togather and could not taught our older culture or tradition to their children thus, nowadays selfishness have been increasing in the world and our tradition value of respect have been decreasing.
In ongoing trend, people do not have interest in our tradition because of this technology and money. All the people want money so, they busy for earning money through technology. Moreover, if people give their time to the family and the community, they take some extra knowledge and get some information about our culture. Therefore, they give instruction about our older culture to their children but public have not time for do any other activity. Because of this reason today any person could not doing respect of any older man as well as our tradition.
To recapitulate, people should give respect our older culture and tradition ,thus we could make our older habit to stadily and other country give respect to our country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91929824561 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36781192809 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477192982456 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5027390239 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 251.0 5.01903807615 5001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267733406403 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103138564678 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100462514565 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191206270597 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841471044215 0.056905535591 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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