Despite knowing the biodiversity’s importance for a long time, human practices have been causing to the massive extinction of different species. This essay will examine the primary reasons of loss of biodiversity and possible solutions to this problem.
To begin with, there are numerous causes of Being extinction of animals and loss of biodiversity. First and foremost, when humans artificially transform the environment, they come up with the notion of cutting the trees for their personal fullfilment. By doing frequently such practice, number of animals have to apart from their natural habitat. As a result, surviving challenges occur of having been out of their natural habitats. Secondly, in order to be economically strong, each and every nation showing much reliability on setting up more industries, which later become cause of heavily environmental pollution. Additionally, one of them polluted water, containing chemicals and harmful substances, flushed out into the drainage which mixes up with the river’s water and other reservoirs, and affect them badly. Not only animals have this polluted water, but also this water becomes the cause of their death.
As far as reasons of loss of biodiversity and animals extinction are concerned, some plausible ways are also concerned to stop being this massive loss. The country who have faith in nature never expanded as such developemnts, which are on the graves of the forests and animals. For instance, the river Ganga is considered to be very sacred and it’s water goes on different parts of the forest, local houses and industrial purpose. Unfortunately, it’s usage is being decreased because of finding chemical elements in it. Also, many animals are found dead having tasted this polluted water. On such kind of cases, states need to implement strict rules on those industries and others organisations which are responsible in it. As well as, individuals need to make concern about sustaining biodiversity, and on animal extinction.
In conclusion, people’s activities that change the environment have negative impact on the world’s ecosystem. However, we can significantly lessen the extinction of species by protecting them and enlightening people about this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54755043228 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07668167865 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610951008646 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1618831221 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.944444444 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162995142628 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535479298124 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569541907278 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114326569593 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310581176642 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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