Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Despite,the intelligent gender is leading in the world, the ecology system is suffering from endangered species and decrease of biodiversity. This ways will examine the main causes of loss biodiversity and possible solution of this issues.
The two main causes species extinction are pollution and over-exploitation of natural resources. When people's has produce a high pollution in the natural by different way, the earth is suffering. Furthermore, the species cannot live under this environment. For instance, the sea pollution by the fuels can decrease number of fishes. Also, the ecosystem is in state of imbalance because people's is exploiting a lot of natural resources. It does not have enough biodiversity. For example, deforestation as a result of people's in-controlled use of trees. consequence of that a lot of species are dying out. In other word, human activities often deplete local flora, fauna and causes loss of biodiversity.
Some possible solution to this problem are promoting awareness among people and protecting natural areas. By,promote awareness among people of the risks from this problem and informing of the result can affect the future generation. The next step , which is protecting the natural areas from over-exploitation of resources and pollution. This way, people should will be more conscious of the environment.
To conclude, people's activities can have a negative impact of ecosystem, They should be protect for more biodiversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52654867257 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19577944613 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0658918198 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0625 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139724197151 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045296203899 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397619587334 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920583441919 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403701892406 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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