Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace ( eg at home, when travelling, etc... )
Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadiantage
Thank to the technological breakthroughs, human's life has become easier and more convenient than in the past. Although these benefits of information technology bring to modern life inrecently that can be demondration in daily activities, it still be doubt about these advantage by some people. In this essay, I'll analyse this situation
People who value modern technology, claimed that it can be a usefoull tool for people to keep in touch with their works and their clients in differnet places. For example instead of long business trips, nowadays online conferences are becoming poplular. It is not only convenient and for businessman and flexible for schedule, but also easy to barter infomations in leaps and bourds. In addition, this is particularly hefphel for busy parents, exoecially, mother. It can reduce stress level and help them to manage their daily activities better
Despite the advantages risentioned above a related criticisrn is that it leads to unhealthy lifestyle. No one deny that it is wonderful to be able to work from home, but a person who spends much time on their computer may find that health suffers in the long run. Besides, we all have instant access to entertainment and special connections are just a click. It also means that personal information could be stolen by easy way, noticeablef, bussiness information. There fore, information technology can damages to some companis by harmful ways when they lost their datas
On the whole, most people profit from the use of mobile technolog, and there are obvious adiantags to its use. However, we need to keep an eye on how much we relyon this resource, other wise the diaschanfages will be greater for everyone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, so, still, for example, in addition, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10791366906 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85139054352 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647482014388 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5381403026 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182355707958 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552312624241 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594878518175 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991623764347 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210009621263 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.