Some people claim that encouraging tourism is important as the country can benefits from tourism. Although I strongly agree that the advantages of tourism towards the nation outweighs the drawbacks, this essay will discuss and examine both points of view.
A primary advantage is that tourism boosts a country’s economy. As the number of tourists, who are willing to spend their money, visit the country, the country’s economy, and businesses definitely benefits and grow because of the higher demand from them. Undoubtedly, this greater demands of consumption and services help increase the employment rate in the country since numerous businesses are required more employees to meet the higher needs. As a result, the country's citizens will become more wealthy from working and serving these tourists.
On the other hand, the plethora of tourists inevitably undermine the country’s environment. Besides the air quality being degraded when these visitors consume a certain types of environmental resources such as wood and fuel, a problem of garbage is another concern. For instance, a recent study from Bangkok University in Thailand discovered an associate trend between the increasing amount of garbage in the huge metropolis and an increment=t of the percentage of the tourists.
To conclude, despite the negative of environmental hazards causing by the foreign visitors, it is imperative to have a larger number of jobs being opened for the country’s citizens. Therefore, I believe if the government encourage tourism, the country’s economy will surely grow and a problem of unemployment will be approached.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09064135739 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9464262979 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.272727273 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124666828487 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537465158291 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439498169326 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840090534359 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462958177846 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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