International travel are more and more cheaper, several countries are opening their doors. Do you think Advantages outweigh Disadvantages?
As the tourism industry is far more becoming expaned in recent years, the dramatic increase in transnational travel has sparked controversy over the potential impacts of this trend. Some people argue that the upsurge in new arrivals will , others concerned that the advantages are outshined by its drawbacks. I, to some extent, favour with the latter.
It is irrefutably that international travel have numerous drawbacks in aspects in our life. When visitors come to tourist atrractions, the daily life of the people here is almost completely turned upside down and with the coming of intenational travelers, the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens maybe reshaped. Besdies, Tourism activities will cause quite serious impacts on the environment by acts of dumping wastes in everywhere and inappropriate use of natural resources such as water or forests.
However, I am far more convinced by the fact that transnational travel will bring profound benefits for both locals and visitors. Firstly, in terms of culture, when visiting other countries, people will have chances to discover new culture and customs there. Differences in social background, culture values and religious beliefs might make the discrepancy of foreigners amd local inhabitants on some issues indelible; however; the higher interaction and communication; the higher level understanding. For instance, Vietnam used to consider Westerners as foes. Now, with the opening to foreign visitors, we have concrete relationshop with these contries and allies in many fields such as medical, education, engerneering,... evenly. Secondly, from the economic perception, international travel will open up opportunities more many locals when foreigners come to visit. In tourist destinations, inhabitants there can earn their living by providing services to the customers and thereby yield the profits for the country as a whole.
In conclusion, while the cons of international visit still exist in our life, we cannot deny that these disadvantages are overshadowed by its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6270096463 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12052440847 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64308681672 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7522306683 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14235031546 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452747793215 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050668692306 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746142177751 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318716863813 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.