Undoubtedly, in the present scenario, the rate of international travel has been increased since it has become cheaper. A growing number of countries are opening their doors in terms of inclining the tourism industry. I am of the opinion that this trend has more merits rather than demerits.
To commence with, the prominent advantage is global harmony. If more and more people would make excursions to diverse nations, they will interact with local people or explore the things. There is more likelihood that their barriers related to language, religions and cultures will decline. Thus, it would bring harmony in the nations when there will be less conflicts among people. In other words, individuals may express their thoughts, opinions and knowledge with each other without any issue. Hence, it would not only promote better understanding but also develop cordial relations among society.
Moreover, tourism is also accountable for the continuous growth of economy of the nations. When voyagers visit any country, it has an implicit impact on its economic growth. The expenditures incurred on the purchase of tickets, accommodation and food directly goes to the higher authorities. These generated funds are used for the overall development of a nation to provide the amenities to the public. Consequently, with the help of tourism, economy also grows. For example, a recent survey conducted by an eminent economist at Oxford University stated that tourism industry is an indispensable sector which has a great role to play. Owing to the fact, more than 70% of the revenue is generated from this sector solely.
However, there are several drawbacks of tourism. The first and foremost demerit is the loss of culture of holiday makers. It is generally seen that, nowadays, people give more preference to go abroad in terms of exploring new splendid opportunities such as employment, migration and getting overseas experience. Although an ample number of skills are acquired by visitors while their travel to foreign countries, the main factor which persuade them to a greater extent is western culture. Individuals opt to change their own culture and religion and follow others when they get influenced by others tradition and customs. Therefore, it leads to the loss of their own culture.
To conclude, tourism has both advantages as well as disadvantages. Despite having a few demerits of this rising trend, its advantages are far more in comparison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29081632653 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79645365798 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614795918367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1049328482 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4166666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323676645525 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732070250622 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067024409705 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18206883578 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823199736478 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 78.4519038076 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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