The Internet has changed the way people information is shared. It has also created certain problems.
What are the problems caused by the Internet and their solutions?
It is obvious that the advent of the internet changes the way people share acquire information. However, such transition is also the breeding ground for prominent problems of the modern world. It is the interest of this essay to examine some of the biggest problems relating to the internet and some possible/ feasible solutions.
On one hand, it is argued that logging onto social networking platforms on the Internet may leave detrimental psychological impacts on users. For example, children who have excessive exposure to violent or inappropriate scenes available on popular web pages such as Youtube or Facebook may start to exhibit peculiar behaviors. In details, They often become more aggressive in their social interactions , and gradually isolate themselves into the virtual world instead of bridging social connections in the real one. In my opinion, one of the proactive methods to resolve this urgent issue takes roots in government actions. Regulations, including content restrictions should be introduced and strictly applied to prevent harmful materials from being published onto the Internet world.
On the other hand, security breaching is also a prominent issue needs immediate attention. The more people rely on the internet for connecting and communicating, the more vulnerable they become as hackers can penetrate and steal information. In recent news reports, there have been cases where computer viruses like “I love you” hacking into protected systems and siphoning away strategic private information of banks or governmental bodies. It was estimated that these breaches in security have caused global financial loss mounting up to billions of dollars. To prevent such technical-based problems, computer users ought to be recommended to reinforce the firewall by installing and regularly updating newest versions of anti-virus software.
In conclusion, while it is very true that the Internet plays an important role in communication, it also also has a fair share of problems that may undermine users’ psychological well-being and cause widespread financial damage. The fundamental guidelines to ameliorate the current problems lie in the combined effort from both government and members of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66568047337 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01483007933 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630177514793 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4973724678 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222773045744 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660780214316 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064200666838 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137263318985 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667580999443 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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