The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created a problem that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solution can you suggest?
There is no doubt that the invention of such advanced technology has been a boon and bane for mankind. While it is observed that, the internet has changed the way information is transferred and interpreted, it also has created many problems for people. In this essay, I will mention the problems and their solutions with relevant examples wherever necessary.
Firstly, it is observed that the internet has increased the incidence of cybercrime around the world. This is because, the connectivity in the technical world has become more powerful, which in turn leads to easy accessibility of classified government documents in hands of criminals. For example, the terrorist groups can access the secret codes and locations of any country, thus leading to vicious terror attacks taking the lives of many. This barbaric, inhuman act is done by taking advantage of technology. In contrast, this same electronic system is used by the defense intelligence unit of army to intercept unlawful activities and protect their country from invasions. The solution to this problem lies in the hands of government regulatory authorities of a country. This committee will be responsible to control and monitor the information exchanged on the internet by people.
Secondly, another major problem people are facing due to excessive use of internet is an identity theft. The reason for this is, sharing of personal details and pictures on social sites (Facebook, Instagram and Snapchat), which leads to easy access and manipulation of these personal files. For instance, the criminals can use this personal information and pictures to forge a passport to hide their actual identity from authorities. However, such a close connectivity and communication due to internet system has helped authorities to track and catch criminals too. The solution is, in the hands of people themselves. They should be alert and not reveal all information on a public platform that can be misused by criminals.
In the end, sharing all the personal information or misusing it depends on a person’s personality and mindset.
In conclusion, although the internet has made many positive changes in our life, we should consider it’s drawbacks. The solution is proper surveillance done by the government and awareness among people.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34435261708 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97305043796 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542699724518 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8274734741 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.105263158 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187034846911 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058077156048 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562054144793 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104283773797 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576953564566 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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