It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media _rich society.
Nowadays, it is true that the development of media make our lives improved and more convenient. It also means our lives are influenced deeply by many sorts of media. A multiple systems of them yield us advantages as well as disadvantages
There are several positive impacts from the media. Firstly, we can communicate to others over the world by social media. We are able to connect to our friends or our partners who are miles away from us just within few minutes. The sites also give us opportunities to connect strangers in far-distant place who share similar interests. Secondly, the diversification of media such as television, magazines or internet, etc make news spread to common people rapidly and attract attention. For instance, the broadcast of bad weather is informed to us quickly for precaution so that we can deal with that problem effectively. The media is also a source which offer people with a wealth of knowledge. We can find out any needed information what is helpful for our work or study on FB or YouTube channel. Moreover, with the growth of internet and social page media, all citizens and governments are able to join in and give opinions on social problems as well as interact with draft policies. Thus, the issues of society are solved better.
In addition, the electric media makes E-commerce developed, we can purchase anything on online service through smartphone and we save plenty of out time.
On the other hand, the modern media systems trigger some drawbacks. The unreliable information are spread quickly, they cause misleading stories and be the negative effect on social problem. The other aspect of disadvantage is that people usually spend their free time on enjoy media. In family, children surf the internet while parents watch tv, the interaction of people by face to face in less, So the gap between generations is more widened. Furthermore, there are many poor quality images or film on tv channel and social media where children can get access to in easily, that affects to educate of younger.
To sum up, it is no doubt that we live in a modern world with media-rich society, we should consider to user media effectively and not let our life depend on it quietly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'system'?
Suggestion: system
...eply by many sorts of media. A multiple systems of them yield us advantages as well as ...
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Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... connect to our friends or our partners who are miles away from us just within few minu...
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Line 2, column 421, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s television, magazines or internet, etc make news spread to common people rapidl...
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Line 2, column 633, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...ith that problem effectively. The media is also a source which offer people with a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89893617021 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70729527645 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577127659574 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8788331028 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9473684211 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7894736842 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268079337032 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835404145154 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784423888227 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17130508173 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105488840771 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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