Is it better to be unemployed in jobs rather than to be employed in jobs even if they don't feel happy or enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While many people claim that inner satisfaction and interest are the fundamental factor for a successful career, I still believe that sometimes it is better to get an unsatisfied job than being jobless.
On the one hand, there are good grounds to argue that sometimes we should not get the job that we find uninterested. First, continually doing something unenjoyable might reduce the labour efficiency because it has remarkable impact on the working behaviours and enthusiastic of employees. Without interest, workers are always tired of many daily tasks which they lack motivation to perform perfectly. Secondly, adhering to a job, which is not corresponding to people’s hobbies can hinder them to pursue their real dream. Several fresh graduates find their first job because of an attractive salary package; however, they don not consider the prospects of the job and the career path they really want to take. As the result, this can negatively impact on their future professional development.
On the other hand, I believe that sometimes taking charge of a discontent work can bring employees more advantages than being out of work. Having a job allows people to cover all their basic needs and have a reasonable quality of life such as housing, food, bills and education. Furthermore, rather than staying at home and waiting for opportunities to pursue passion, having jobs not basing on our enjoyment affords us a chance to enrich knowledge and gain experience which we can be utilized in our future career. For instance, the creativity in finance and accounting that Steve Jobs gained from accounting department when he was young has helped him to reach his goal in microcomputer revolution.
In conclusion, if the chance to follow dream has not come yet, I think people should not waste any employment opportunities because they are unexciting, they have their own merits, though.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19218241042 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88610010024 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628664495114 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8239289287 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.833333333 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216305397373 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689718227406 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482086178895 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122502187801 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339306658723 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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