It is better for college students to live in schools than live in at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present age, there is a common belief that living in a dormitory is better for university students than living at home with their parents. Personally, I disagree with this view because I believe that both are equally beneficial for college students.
On the one hand, I understand why it is better for college students to live in schools. One reason is that living in halls of residence may help students become more mature. This is because living separately from parents, students might be able to learn how to live independently. Taking good care of themselves or struggling the difficulties in the life is the best way of showing each individual’s maturity. Another reasons is that when students live in the dormitory, these people can be more exposed to great educational opportunities. For example, students may participate in a variety of school clubs like music club, sport club, and science club where not only can they broaden the horizon but they also interact and socialize with many friends. Without such occasions, the life of students at college may be monotonous and boring.
On the other hand, despite the above arguments, I strongly believe that living with family brings more beneficial in some facets. To begin with, it is more economical to stay at home. Students can save a huge amount of the living costs including rents, electricity and water bills, and others. As a results they will have more money to spend on other basic need in their life and become more financially comfortable. Furthermore, living with family is better and safer. This is understandable because parents can put their children under their control, otherwise, students might be easily lured into social evils or temptations from their friends
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I am of opinion that living at schools or living with family has its own unique advantages for tertiary students for the above mentioned arguments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08934707904 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85797046554 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556701030928 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4173339986 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512785637197 0.244688304435 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179864019008 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119826356349 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344601666624 0.151304729494 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103847760974 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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