It is better for college students to live in schools than live in at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
In the present age, there is a common belief that living in a dormitory is better for university students than living at home with their parents. Personally, I disagree with this view because I believe that both are equally beneficial for college students.
On the one hand, I understand why it is better for college students to live in schools. One reason is that living in halls of residence may help students become more mature. This is because living separately from parents, students might be able to learn how to live independently. Taking good care of themselves or struggling the difficulties in the life is the best way of showing each individual’s maturity. Another reasons is that when students live in the dormitory, these people could be exposed to great educational opportunities. For example, students may take part in a variety of school clubs like music club, sport club, and science club where not only can they broaden the horizon but they also interact and communicate with many friends. Without such occasions, the life of students at college may be monotonous and boring.
On the other hand, despite the above arguments, I strongly believe that living with family brings more beneficial in some facets. To begin with, it is more economical to stay at home. Students can save a huge amount of the living costs including rents, electricity and water bills, and others. As a results they will have more money to spend on other basic need in their life and become more financially comfortable. Furthermore, living with family is better and safer. This is understandable because parents can put their children under their control, otherwise, students might be easily lured into social evils or temptations from their friends
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I am of opinion that living at schools or living with family has its own unique advantages for tertiary students for the above mentioned arguments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...tricity and water bills, and others. As a results they will have more money to spend on o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04953560372 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78078902899 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560371517028 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9635988995 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.733333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477677377862 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16594039862 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124622183918 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325313873076 0.151304729494 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102078637796 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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