It is difficult for people in cities to do physical exercise. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is true that exercising can be a challenge for big city dwellers. While there are some factors that might be the roots of this issue, a number of remedies can be suggested to solve the problem.
Of all the various causes which make exercising a difficult task for people living in metropolises, one is the lifestyle they have adopted. It is no wonder that city life is fast-paced, where people have to work harder and harder to earn more, move up the career ladder and meet their long-term needs. This way of life, in turn, leaves little or no time to exercise. A second factor is linked with facilities required. Being mainly comprised of densely-located skyscrapers, high-rise apartments and business centers, cities often lack parks with tracks for jogging, open-air gyms with parallel bars and other equipment to exercise.
Focusing on possible solutions, perhaps the most effective one is to make exercise compulsory part of education and work. If employers, schools, universities and colleges implement this change, we can encourage better physical activity in cities. Another remedy to solve this issue would be to improve the existing infrastructure to exercise, probably by building more parks and gyms, and upgrading the existing ones through investment. Finally, the government can, at least, organize running marathons more frequently and motivate people with valuable prizes as it is done in New York City every Sunday.
In conclusion, the lack of exercise facilities and city residents’ lifestyle seem to be major culprits that make exercise a difficult practice. Nevertheless, the key to the problem lies with several government initiatives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'mainly composed of'?
Suggestion: mainly composed of
... linked with facilities required. Being mainly comprised of densely-located skyscrapers, high-rise ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31320754717 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9015506344 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645283018868 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0088749192 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356430242696 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110092022194 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741717851952 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218850073844 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777171179378 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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