Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Paying taxes is an important responsibility which members of most societies shoulder. While some think that just this contribution suffices to regard them as good citizens, I side with those who believe that there are other essential qualities that people should always bear in mind.
On the one hand, supporters say there are two main reasons why taxpayers’ contribution is more than enough for society. Governments, to a certain extent, are financially dependent on these fees as they need to fill the budget. This money is used to give salaries, construct new homes, support social services, such as public libraries and schools, to name but a few. In addition to being the main economic driver, taxes also ensure medical care after retirement for some people. In developed countries, for example, social security taxes which working people pay throughout their lives add up to provide them with free access to use healthcare services.
However, I agree with those who argue that there are other responsibilities which people should take. Firstly, they should care about the environment. Never have green issues been so common as nowadays and people should do their fair share to make at least a small difference, for instance by recycling. Secondly, good members of society are always law-obedient. Societies should not look as scary places because of the increasing number of incidents. If people abide by the law, this, I think, is as valuable contribution they make to their society as paying taxes.
In conclusion, although there are convincing arguments as to whether paying is the most crucial contribution to society, I support those who believe that people should also be environmentally-conscious and law-obedient.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...although there are convincing arguments as to whether paying is the most crucial contribution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, as to, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30072463768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0507396984 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619565217391 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7382852389 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.5 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322795508257 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102056878249 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815392110047 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189507757701 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766162800849 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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