It is difficult for people to live in cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what are solutions could be taken to solve the problem?
It is true that nowadays people living in cities have much less physical exercise compared to our ancestors. This essay will discuss the causes of being less exercise and the measures that how can we solve this issue.
Lacking of physical exercise is the one of the significant issue exists in our modern society, and there are a few possibilities to cause this. Firstly, the majority of working adults in cities are likely to have a higher sedentary hour. For instance, people who work in office require a longer hours to sit in front of their computer. Secondly, public transports and private vehicles are getting popular in cities recently, we are therefore able to commute from one place to the other without raising our heart rate. As a result, the two main possibilities above address the situation that people in cities may encounter on their daily basis.
However, there are some measures could be done to solve, or at least mitigate, this problem. First, government can impose a law that compelling companies to allow their employees to take an hour or two in a week to do some cardio exercises during their working hour. By making this law, employees are unnecessary to worry if they have not enough time for doing exercise when they are back home. Second, our government can promote choosing biking to commute to work if office workers live in bikeable area. Like Taipei government has launched “U bike”, a point-to-point renting bike in Taipei, that has boosted up the will for commuters to utilize for short term travelling, which in turn gradually increase their chance for exercising. As a consequence, this methods may be able to tackle the problem of being less exercising for city dwellers.
In conclusion, although there indeed are some cautions of lacking of exercising, we can start taking actions to increase physical exercise.
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Daily exercise always keeps…
Daily exercise always keeps our bodies active and healthy. people who staying in cities are not focusing on this because of various reasons. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the obstacles they are facing along with some feasible solutions.
There are several reasons why city people unable to concentrate on physical education firstly, place constraints because of overpopulation in cities there is no free space to build parks or playgrounds. Last year I saw in one of the newspapers a certain city passing rule to demolish the parks and constructing the apartments. Secondly, time constraints people are busy in their carrier to earn money as the living lifestyle in cities are very expensive. In cities, people are spending most of their time in traveling to reach their destination as well.
According to me either Government or local communities, need to take initiation to run health-related campaigns’. The government should allocate enough space to construct parks, playgrounds in the cities. Furthermore, companies can establish gyms in office buildings and encourage people to do workouts. They can add the policy of either daily or weekly workers need to do any exercise such as aerobics, yoga, Zumba for at least 30 mins before start working. Apartments need to plan facilities like swimming pool, indoor or outdoor courts can help the people who ever staying in those apartments.
Health is wealth, I want to conclude that physical fitness is important for every individual, people need to understand the benefits and need to facilitate by themself to do daily work outs which may results for them to stay healthier in the society. They can be the best example for other citizens as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to bike'.
Suggestion: to bike
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01607717042 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64923670973 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9385369624 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204801170933 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711832801156 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426170497391 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118207860867 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351339130578 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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