The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face to face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?
The modern social media are the first option for youth to communicate with their friends, and that gradually substitute face-to-face contact. In my opinion, I think the negative consequences surpass the benefits.
The trend of the social media are replacing the way of talking in-person that have some drawbacks in terms of social aspect. First and the foremost, social media shows the thinking and the life moment from our friends. Some people may think this can catch up with their friend more easily and efficiently by simply following their Facebook or Twitter page, I, however, think this can lead to a reducing of friends meeting, which is a genuine approach for maintaining a healthy friendship. On top of this, the situation of chatting via social media can lead to the situation of lacking social ability. As a result, people may be trapped in their small social zone and be eventually isolated from our society.
In addition, there will be some more problem derived from losing social ability. When people have much less chance to make new friends, they might have much fewer friends as time goes by, and this could eventually cause some mental problem. Autism and depression, for example, are the common mental diseases that highly related to social problem in modern society. Furthermore, if these diseases accompany with them to their elder age, dementia can be occurred. My grandfather, for instance, he is exactly the example of this story, having social difficulty that lead to depression, and eventually have dementia. Consequently, the social difficulty can not only make fewer friends and therefore cause mental disease.
In conclusion, while the modern social media wide-spread in this century, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the advantage of this situation that people are using more social media instead of chatting in-person.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24080267559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66071957217 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0472705081 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7142857143 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290294360114 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953964219208 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831246822739 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199257939338 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830928517335 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.