It is the duty of international community to check all nations whether they are using fossil fuels in limited amount what extent do you agree or disagree? Relevant example and reason

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It is the duty of international community to check all nations whether they are using fossil fuels in limited amount what extent do you agree or disagree? Relevant example and reason

It is argued that, it is responsibility of foreigner- leadership to evaluate all countries that whether, they are exhausted to non- renewable resources in a little quantity. I strongly agree this statement because, it has been lead to pollution as well as increasing ailment for mankind life.

At first glance, pollution is highly worse impact on environment to consumed a ton of fossil fuels in daily life such as coal, petroleum and so on. Moreover, a fossil fuels were consumed to vehicles which is upsurge utilise pollutant particles in the habitat. To illustrate; the researcher found that coal is used in making bricks and thermal plant chimneys for produce electricity so that, non- renewable resources 74% plummet pollutant particles in the environment.

In addition to this, the ailment increase in around us by fossil fuels. Furthermore, the non- renewable resources emitted a lot of hazardous gases in the atmosphere and overcome oxygen in the surrounding. The best epitome of this is the Hindustan time was conducted survey a large amount of coal and petroleum were incline cardiac vascular ( heart beat) and higher blood pressure diseases. It was counted ten out of 8 people suffered from diseases.

To conclude, I believe that duties of international membership to check nations which is hard go limited fossil fuels so I agree that, this argument is true. Due to this reason, for that health issues and environment problems.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19658119658 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89868364329 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2081727061 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.545454545 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162519300466 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552962233528 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652039919387 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100670206436 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714661089131 0.056905535591 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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