Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree?
"Money is the worst discovery of human life to be trusted the material to trust the human nature" Nevertheless, there are some issues which are irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance the given topic assertion that governor agencies expenditure economy on trains than roads or not? In this essay, I am going to examine this question and dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, I reckon that if authorities expenditure money on railways which is also part and parcel role in everyone life. Moreover, Due to that reason, the trains is convincent to save a lot of time in modern scenario yet numerous people have swayed in hectic schedule especially, business man.
Admittedly, enivornment is less pollutant to used electrical trains in the world whenever railway is flexible and luxury transport mode in globalization. Electricity trains have no worse impact on ecosystem who is encourage the green revolution and it is provide excellent condition for mortal. The best epitome of this is overseas are developed countries especially united state America run away electrical train they have help the officer employee to save time and reach a destination on perfect time.
On the other hand, railway facilities are rendered in colossal city according to my perspective, people used to private vehicles for mode of transportation whom had no enough money it is under a poverty. Roads is beneficial to transport material from one place to another especially, merchants have been import good consumers through roads transport because it is cure for high fair and taxes of trains. Roads are significant role in homoe sapien life.
To crown it all, I say that my opinion the government spend money on railways because which is comfortable like facilities yet roads is less cost transport and it used to freely opinion of everyone used to vehicle for cover far distance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: encouraged
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the green revolution and it is provide excellent condition for mortal. The best...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, i reckon, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09493670886 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8437026512 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585443037975 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0932562412 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0839597880782 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0299584432971 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359185107082 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0500788897006 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316133861733 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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