It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are many types of communication in the world, however, the most excellent preference of people is to communicate via internet. Once, some people believe that this is an excellent means of communication, the other find out that this is not the best place to find information. It has both pros and cons which would be discussed further.
Firstly, it is regard to emphasize that as the world is developing people become relied on accessories. Mostly, this equipment give people opportunity to use internet services. By the contrast, the utilization of mass media is on an augmentation. In order to be aware of news, novel facts and advertisements, people should usually be online. It is significant that the existence of improper information is high, but internet inspectors are still working to reduce amount or even to process the data. Subsequently, these attempts will show the results in near feature.
On the other hand, the benefits of internet overshadow drawbacks. The one of the crucial factors is that the internet is the fastest way to get information as well as provide it to suppliers. Whereas, by this convenience people can save their time to do another activity. Moreover, the using of internet is cost-effective, since, instead of buying, expecting and the other costs like buying different types of newspaper, people can search it in internet. From the other point of view, it is on a purpose to use among the people, who deal with any kind of educational programs. Instead of going to libraries and spending time on research the book, they can simply get it from the most eminent professors as well as from their role models, online.
In conclusion, everything should be adequate when it is used appropriately. People should to know, how to pick up useful and wright information and how to handling the data. Hence, the useful information is a precious treasury to everybody.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion as well as provide it to suppliers. Whereas, by this convenience people can save th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02523659306 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97512634481 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4230833397 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263021435934 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696296645044 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771574200186 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163669617391 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146007383553 0.056905535591 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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