It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the Internet is getting increasingly popular to communicate and search for data from all over the world. Although, many people find this a very good source, some argue that the internet is not always a good source to look up for something. This essay will discuss why the internet should not always be trusted.
Increasing numbers of people are relying heavily on online information. These online platforms helps them get their work done faster and better in addition to, that due to advancement of technology one can access it from anywhere around the globe through their phones and laptops for instance,it also helps in learning and developing certain skills for free which may cost very much if learning from a professional for instance, university students across the world learn things outside their curriculum which in turn proves to be very beneficial in their work life. Due to all these reasons, people turn to the internet first for any of their problems.
However, the legitimacy of these sources are still in doubt. I believe having internet accessible to everyone is dangerous because anyone can post almost anything on it, also having your information online raise several concerns. for instance, there are many individuals on Youtube teaching and talking about a subject even though they don't have any professional qualification for that, the information given by these can cause various difficulties for people trusting it. For these reasons, I believe one should not always rely on something that they saw online.
In conclusion, while, it is true that the internet may provide efficiency to our work but the credibility sources can not always be trusted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, talking about, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23357664234 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67133340566 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591240875912 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.537054665 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.363636364 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136885600159 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614460417085 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360734168166 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933191113025 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382522203165 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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