It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
It is true that some people have different talent than others. While others argue that talent can be acquired from birth, I believe that it is best that people with potential talent should undergo a guidance. Both of these arguments will be evaluated in this essay.
On the one hand, some people are born with innate talent. This talent maybe originated from one of the genes of the parents. For example, in a scientific study in the USA, it is proven that the probability of parents passing their talent to their off-spring is relatively high. The father who has strong vocal cords can possibly pass this structure to his child. This can result in a generation of singers in the family. This makes it clear that even without supervision from a professional trainer, a child can possess inherited talent.
On the other hand, most people acquired their talent through training and mentoring. Talents nurtured by consistent training and constant guidance can lead to a successful skill development. For instance, not all basketball players come from a family of sports person. In a survey made in the UK, it found that 80% of the highest paid players had done rigorous training. This makes it true that training encourage and empower the players to become more discipline and focus their minds into the development of their skills.
In conclusion, although some people have gifted talent, I believe that the most effective way to enhance and develop one’s skill is through rigid training. It is predicted that more people will be encouraged to mold their skills through coaching in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
.... The father who has strong vocal cords can possibly pass this structure to his child. This ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'it is true', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.250847457627 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.15593220339 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0779661016949 0.0946595960268 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0237288135593 0.0501214627716 47% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0542372881356 0.0437548338989 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15593220339 0.122226691241 128% => OK
Participles: 0.0406779661017 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54652356076 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0203389830508 0.0326793684256 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.115254237288 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0271186440678 0.021408717616 127% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00338983050847 0.011925033212 28% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1601.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 316.048096192 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97388059701 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.376865671642 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272388059701 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167910447761 0.203846283523 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111940298507 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54652356076 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559701492537 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 56.6118884497 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.75 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5685407875 49.517814964 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0625 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7743622355 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.814263465372 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 43.9888059701 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.91304347826 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272202972146 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.113396222998 0.102741220458 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0822880241516 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519104809503 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160327061125 0.148594505496 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109303857824 0.134430193775 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641599396244 0.0742795772207 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327800862435 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0380754204824 0.0638462369009 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194160713549 0.228012699653 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393859212145 0.058150111329 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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