It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Inheriting skills are a gift of nature. Some people believe that human is born with specific skills which can not be learned however others believed that humans can be learned any skill by training. In my opinion, although, people have specific abilities by born, it is an extra feature yet any skill can be learned by training. The human attains various abilities by inheritance such as art music and sports, it is an advantageous aspect but training is a real keystone.
On the one hand, some people are genetically talented, they don't have to learn specific skills. Such as singers artists, and sports players, don't need to learn the skills they have God-gifted talent. For instance, the well-known singer of Pakistan Mr. Ahmed Ali, who is the son of legend singer Amant Ali, has inherited the abilities to sing, we have lots of examples in daily life which can prove some people have an inborn talent, they not have to work hard. We can not deny the value and importance of talent but in spite of the fact that any human can be taught these techniques.
On the other hand, learning new skills is not a piece of cake, but the child can learn new skills by training. It is not impossible to learn new skills. When we have been giving training to a child since childhood he learns a new skill. We see in our daily life singers, artist, and sportsman whose parents are not singers and artists but they become world-class singers and artists.
For instance, a great name in Pakistan a well-known singer, Atif Aslam he said that no one is in the family is a singer even in the music field, but we can see he is doing a tremendous job he has huge numbers of fans, only by learning techniques of singing.
To sum, in my opinion, continuous and constant practice can make humans perfect in the required field but is not mean that inborn talent is irrelevant it matter but is also demand practice, finally we can say anything can be achieved by regular practice because nothing is impossible in this world.
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also, but, finally, however, if, so, well, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61731843575 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45706713929 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491620111732 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2937729826 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20048169933 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710580851637 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655827308751 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103942876824 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563502489375 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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