The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement.
Indeed, government collects funds from civilians to provide amenities. Investments in arts, music and theatre are waste of money. Instead of this, authorities should invest these money to give better public service. According to me, public service is better option.
To commence with, government must provides basic public facilities to the citizens because, they pay tax to the government and it is the whole responsibility of the government to fulfil the needs of the individuals such as transportation and roads. By which people can travel without any external difficulty. Additionally, public service is more important rather than any other purpose because tax is also used tackle catastropes. In case of global pandemic, that funds can be used to give medical facilities to the victims. For example, in recent corona pandemic, Newzeland became first corona free nation due to the brilliant use of their investments. As a result of this, nation can tackle difficult situations.
Furthermore, investment on public museum is very beneficial for the individual because they get to know about their culture, tradition and history if government spend the money on the public by which they can get in touch with their background and it also inspire them. However, government should invest low amount of invested funds on arts, theatre and music because, it gives rise to talent among the people by which they brings laurens to the name of belonging nation which leads to the personality of the nation all over the world.
In conclusion, art, theatre and music are important but government should give first priority to the basic service because it is public right.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...tead of this, authorities should invest these money to give better public service. Accordin...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...se money to give better public service. According to me, public service is better option. To...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'inspires'?
Suggestion: inspires
...touch with their background and it also inspire them. However, government should invest...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...o talent among the people by which they brings laurens to the name of belonging nation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23880597015 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76836503271 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5624539561 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375712382866 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133663559097 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110156651102 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260084135662 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110691877611 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.