Some people think that politicians have greater influence on the world. Others, however believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is often considered a debatable question that whether lawmakers or researchers influenced the globe. Therefore, fiction of masses claim that the prominent effect of ministers is greatest on the entire world. While opponents have the opinion of supporting scientists to much extent owing to having distinct perspectives. To my mind, both elements have their obvious benefits. Having said that, i am in favor of latter view, for that i will disclose my perspectives in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, in maintaining rule and regulations leaders play their vital role for society. As due to law and orders, developing discipline in midst of population of particular country would far easier, if a well-experienced and educated politic party is runs the whole system. This can be illustrated by the availability of police force that could feasible solely in the presence of politicians. Since, they hire security men for communities to make effective law and orders. Simultaneously, to bestow the facility to secure life of mankind from offence. As a consequence, signifinancy of lawmakers cannot be ignored, as they provide us safest life-style.
On the other hand, supporters from entire world of scientists may provide support them merely, as it cannot be denied that modern life-styles would be difficult without scientists. Being innovations, researchers invent a plethora of technological appliances and blessed folks with boons such as electricity and internet. It has been noticed that convenients living-styles are the fruitful results of scientific originations. Father of physics: Newton, for example, invented the electric power to supply for masses. Thus, it might far easier for them to subsist in wrapped environments. In resulting, no denying the fact that standard of living-style is paramount consequence of scientist's discoveries.
To move on my opinion and conclusion, although there are unique importance of both aspects according to their diligence work. That said, it seems to me that researches discovered by scientists have prominence impact on the globe as i discussed before. The main cause of not supporting to lawmakers is found provoking citizens to get into strikes and protest through making wrong rule and regulations namely on going protest in Delhi.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aking wrong rule and regulations namely on going protest in Delhi.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49014084507 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18096151618 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642253521127 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8459466796 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.45 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15655647253 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415805663227 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556194357037 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987695647251 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970220254499 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.