The governments investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement.
It is argued that authorities should spend money on public services rather than invest in arts, music as well as theatre. However, I agreewith this statement to some extent due to certain reasons.
To begin with, government should spend money on public services, there are various reasons behind this. The first and foremost reason is that individual life depend on public services like on medical services, schools and others. If politicians does not spend money these thing human life will more affected by some adverse effects. For example, if government do not invest fund in school, thus the school will become less developed and children will not get the higher success. Thus, it put a bad influence on their future, because due to less education they will not receive better job. Hence, authorities should invest fund in public services.
Furthermore, government should not only spend money on public services, but also invest fund in arts, music and theatre due to various reasons. Firstly, music as well as theatre are the main source of entertainment. If authorities do not spend money on theatre and music, so these places may have to close because without the help of government these institutions can not provide entertainment to public. Thus,without enjoyment people can feel stressed and many difficulties may arise.
In conclusion, I reiterate that authorities should invest fund equally in public services and on arts, music and theatre.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22978723404 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66297994737 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548936170213 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6058106418 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5384615385 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407018235226 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148921059483 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100915169104 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261707553892 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219109156796 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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