Is it a good idea for teenagers to have a part time job. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a phenomenon upsurge in the number of students who take part in part - time job. Much as it is often argued that it is unessential and can affect teenagers negatively, I wholeheartedly believe that students ought to have a part-time job.
To commence with, there is no denying that students themselves are able to reap a lot of benefits from doing part - time job. Initially, it is undeniably considered as an efficacious way to face up to financial problems. Working part time makes it possible for students to contribute to diminish the burden on their parents. As a result, it is more likely for them to continue their studying along with pursue their own interests such as shopping, traveling, etc. Apart from that, part time is apparently proved to leave long-lasting impact on the development of adolescents in all aspects in this modern world. They will find it possible to find a job commensurate with their talents or their hobby, which is likely to help them have a more potential career prospects. Last but not least, part – time job is highly recommended for teenagers with the aim of enhancing their skills. Youngsters should utilize the chance of doing part – time job to develop some perquisite skills for future job such as communication, problem solving, or time management.
Furthermore, it is obvious that part - time jobs also can exert a positive effect on the society. In all likelihood, that a new generation has a good command of skills and disciplinary knowledge is able to provide a highly qualified workforce for the future. This definitely can lead to more foreign investments and increased wealth. As a result, the living a standard of individuals will be significantly enhanced, which can makes a great contribution to the socio – economic development of the nation.
To sum up, I strongly argue that students should spend time on engaging in part - time job as long as they can arrange a reasonable timetable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... face up to financial problems. Working part time makes it possible for students to contr...
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Line 2, column 483, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...pping, traveling, etc. Apart from that, part time is apparently proved to leave long-last...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...ll be significantly enhanced, which can makes a great contribution to the socio – eco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, so, apart from, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95770392749 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95155206838 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543806646526 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3004217059 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301419008266 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109306318931 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794667055664 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183911604829 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665195510834 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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