It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books."
Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.
In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
There is a controversial wherein people are talking about what is the best method to learn everything in the world. Some prefer to obtain knowledge from a variety of books because it is an easy and safe way of learning fact. Others believe that if people can experience something that you want to understand then they would not forget it. From my perspective, books and experience are both needed and give us different help when we study something new. This essay is going to explain my reason for it.
People always use to gain new knowledge from books because it is the simplest way. Due to the fact that people can easily to get books in shops or online when they want to learn a new skill so they can study these book immediately. Moreover, many academic subjects really need a text or image to make people understand because it is really hard to practice in the real world such as math and medication. For example, not everyone can have an opportunity to go to outer space or get a nice machine to observe the star, but they can through books to gain a lot of knowledge that they are interested in.
On the other hand, there are also many things that people can study efficiently if they try to learn through practice because they will remember the feeling when they do it over and over. For instance, students who are playing basketball after school every day definitely do well than the others who only know the rules by reading the book. Furthermore, something can only feel with our body like the taste of food, sense of touch or even how to deal with every emotional situation. Therefore, if we have not been through these then we never know what is it like, and it is cannot learn from the text.
In conclusion, there are many ways to gain knowledge in this modern world and it is hard to definite what is the best source. However, in my opinion, people can choose or combine any method to make sure they reach their final goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, talking about, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51129943503 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35315482077 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528248587571 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7786535846 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.466666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129854364655 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525347854811 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501391650074 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872389802386 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207221596579 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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