It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
In this contemporary era, the risk taking has been mandatory in person's workplace lives and in their private ones also. This essay will shed some light upon the number of merits than the demerits of the manifested notion in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, an individual takes risk in professional term to promote oneself and to get higher opportunities for them in his or her work station. For instance, some people today are not satisfy by their current job profiles and they want to work as a higher employee and in biggest fields. Whether they are eligible for that sector. To obtain according to their profile a person take chance to get high paid jobs and upper rank in their work premises. However, they put their jobs in danger to get a job according to their will.
Furthermore, human beings and danger their lives to get a perfect relationship. To examplify, some people get into a relationship in their younger age by doing so they can made better understanding with their partner. On the other hand, few individual thinks that, this is the wastage of time and they do not take any danger to be in a relationship. As a result of this, because they are not familiar with their loved ones. Therefore, it is important for a person to put his life in danger to get better compatibility in their personal lives.
In conclusion, there are plethora of goods in taking a chance for a people to get better opportunities in the work and relationships also.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: as well
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...demerits of the manifested notion in the forthcoming paragraphs. To commence w...
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...idual takes risk in professional term to promote oneself and to get higher opport...
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Suggestion: satisfied
...For instance, some people today are not satisfy by their current job profiles and they ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the biggest'.
Suggestion: in the biggest
...y want to work as a higher employee and in biggest fields. Whether they are eligible for t...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
... their younger age by doing so they can made better understanding with their partner...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...rtunities in the work and relationships also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74031007752 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77084074605 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2844238553 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0769230769 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345619739141 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127553710364 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711358777685 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199377235565 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508616278361 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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